Monday, August 12, 2013


Photo Essay While I was in the United states of America

-Judy Choi-



                                                Monday
This picture is taken by my computer. This is Kristen Cuda. She is my best friend while I was in the United States of America.  Her mother is really nice. I've went to her house before. Her house is really big and she has a maid.. Rich...!! I really miss her. We were in the same class when we were in the 4th and 5th grade. We went to birthday parties together and we had a great time togther I really miss her^^ But we still contect with each orher in facebook. We went shopping together in Macy's Mall and we also had ice-cream together^^



                                                Tuesday
The person in this picture is Bailey Beal. She is really good at horse back riding. I didn't get to ride the horse but the horse looked very beautiful. This horse belongs to Bailey. She has a barn in her house. Her house is really big and her dream goal is to a famous horse back rider. She said she going to try for the contest and many races. I like the way she is smiling at the camera with her horse. The winning pin that is held by the horse is because she won a gold medal in the country horse back riding contest. I hope she is riding the horse right now. GOOD LUCK BAILEY!!!~
                                                   Wednesday
These are my friends. At the last day when I was in the United States of America I took this picture to take it with me. We had a golf party in Ben Hoffman's house. His house is really big enough to play golf. I will explain from the first person from the right. He is Andrew's brother. He is in high school and really good at football. The next person next to him is Ben's brother. He is really nice and has a beautiful girl friend. The person who are over to each other is Ben and Andrew. The boy with the cap is Ben. The three girls are Emily, Libby and Jessica. They are all good friend of mine. They were really nice to me when I was in the United States of America I really want to go back and play golf with them again. It was a happy memory.
                                             Thursday 
This is the cookie that my friends and I had made. This picture was actually taken by my friend and sent me this. It was taken in Caitlin Hudic's birthday party. Caitlin was my best friend while I was in the United States. Her birthday party was held in a country side swimming pool. i bought her a vanilla lipgloss and a gift card for justice 'the girl's clothes shop'. She was really happy when she received my gift. I really miss her and I still have contact with her in facebook almost everyday. These cookies were so delicious^^

Friday

The background of this picture was my Elementry school that I had went to. I took this picture. This school's name is Ohara elementry school. I took this picture when we graduated. My friends are lying on the grass. The boy with the blue is Andrew and the pink is Ben, the boy with the black t-shirt is Carson Cohen. There is Peter, my best friend and his brother Mike. People on the stairs are my friend's sisters and brothers. We had many fun times together and we also had chicken in the backyard of the school.



                               Saturday


This picture is taken by me when I was in the elementry school with her. This is her concentrating to the teacher while math class. I have done all of my work but Kristen didn't finished it. So I helped her some of her math problems and I took a picture of her pretty and gorgeous face^^ I really miss her ~~!! Especially her hat is very pretty. Her hat was made by her mother who is really really nice to me

Sunday


This is a photo that I took in the United States of America Pittsburgh Pennsylvania. The person with the coke t-shirt is my best friend Ben Hoffman and the middle person who is playing with his tongue is Carson Cohen. He was also my friend we were in the same classroom when we were in the United States of the America. The other person who is playing with the tongue is Andrew Friend he is a "friend" of mine.My sister and his sister is really nice to each other. Between the "tongue" friends there is a boy between. his name is Peter Mciroy. This picture was taken in his house. The person who is in the way way back is Henry. He likes to play a lot!! REALLY!! He really messes other people's stuff but he was a good friend. But now I left the US and I really miss them a lot.
-Judy Choi-

1 comment:

  1. You described your life in the United States very well. Did you enjoy your life in US? I think you forgot to include captions on your pictures. Also, you could have used sensory expressions, such as the scent and taste of the cookies. You can change "It was delicious" to "The chocolate and vanilla flavors mixed into a harmony, pervading a sweet and plain scent inside the mouth."

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